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Made of Love

‘How to rouse a teenager

whilst running late for work,

without incurring

cerebral haemorrhage’

I could write a book about it…

 

‘Give me a cuddle’ he says

all 6 foot, 17 years of him

It’s an excuse

to delay the act

of getting out of bed-

and I know it

‘D' you think I’m made of love?’ I say,

hurdling the unwashed undies

littering his floor.

Soon he will be gone,

already is to some degree;

it’s a countdown

to sleep filled, untroubled nights

where I don’t lie awake,

waiting,

wondering…

 

Made of love?

The world knows it,

I know it,

his little finger knows it,

I stoop to swoop

embrace the scent

of unwashed breath

and sleep soaked skin

You bet I am!

◄ Space Beat Haiku

Applying Logic ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (8943)

Thu 6th Jan 2011 13:49

I love this! Having a 16 year old teenage son also 6' skinny, whom I attempt to drag out of his pit of a room in order to usher to college every morning. Thanks for expresing my sentiments so effortlessly. PS. Where can I get that book?! ;) x

<Deleted User> (6534)

Fri 3rd Dec 2010 19:42

It made me think of this song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uvIJ8ehVQJU

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John Aikman

Wed 24th Nov 2010 20:44

I spent the best part of an hour trying to get a 16 year old boy out of bed and off to school this morning...and it lead me back to this poem.

The last verse is utterly beautiful. I know he loves me...though you'd never know it at 8.00 a.m. : )

Thank you!

Jxxx

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Elaine Booth

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 19:46

Yes, quite agree with all of this - very true to life, wrapped around that little finger - so am I too! These man-child things! Yes I am looking forward to unbroken sleep too! But, will we ever get it I ask?! Even when away they creep into your thoughts..! x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Nov 2010 20:24

A winner, Isobel, honest and just so true of us all. What an age! We never give up, do we, on pouring out LOVE regardless of manipulation? 'Give me a cuddle' turns us to jelly, the little monsters!

<Deleted User> (7212)

Fri 19th Nov 2010 18:17

Honestry... like baclava, made, I believe, from Honey and Pastry (and a few Wolnuts, maybe ?) :)

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Andy N

Fri 19th Nov 2010 13:57

sentiment but i like it, isobel.. i've wrote a few pieces akin to this about my nephew who is 3 next week... someday i'll show him them, but not yet

but on your piece, i particularly like the honestry in the piece x

<Deleted User> (7164)

Fri 19th Nov 2010 12:50

Ah Isobel, I was wondering what point you were making too :-)
My mother brought me up believing I was born on a Monday. Later I discovered it was Thursday which defies the original saying in terms of actual travel but is true in other ways.

This would be a decent filler in a performance or read around with the right vocal intonations.x

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Isobel

Fri 19th Nov 2010 12:42

It wasn't an important point - just a silly one - that I was a Friday's child not a Wednesday one (loving and giving as opposed to full of woe) I think most of us are though - we just cope with the woe as we go along the way :)
I'm sure I'll worry a whole lot more about the girls - something I'm not looking forward to!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:27

What point were you trying to prove, out of interest?

I do like this. As the parent of a 19 year old woman child, I connect with it :D Hmmm...might even inspire me to write one of my own, something about hearing her stagger drunkenly round the front yard before lurching through the door hehe

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Isobel

Fri 19th Nov 2010 07:04

Thank you all. Banksy moved? Wow - that's praise indeed. I did use a bit of poetic licence. My son isn't quite 6 foot but it sounded better. I also learnt to switch off the worrying cos I couldn't cope with the lack of sleep. I now stuff ear plugs in. However I do look forward to the day when I'll be able to sleep knowing the house has closed down for the night - though I'm sure I'll miss him like crazy.

I wrote the poem a couple of months ago - it arose from me saying those actual words and then the poem just wrote itself. It aint brilliant poetry but I posted it to prove a point LOL x

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 19th Nov 2010 06:55

Oh god I'm crying now! Saw my daughter at the weekend - cried most of the way home (5 hour journey) she is a total ray of sunshine and I miss her so much! My son is like a warm soft snuggly cloud of cotton wool - a very comforting person. Both are equally lovely in their own special ways. x

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Dave Bradley

Fri 19th Nov 2010 00:37

Love it - so much humanity in it. I could go on, but particularly liked the use of bold letters for GETTING OUT OF BED. It felt so right. Everyone who's been a parent of teenegers will connect with it. Why don't we use bold more?

<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 18th Nov 2010 23:43

for only the second time you have me sitting here with a tear in my eye. well done. xx

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Francine

Thu 18th Nov 2010 21:10

Awww...
Even if his little finger knows it - He better say 'Awww' too ; )

p.s. You are Friday's child for sure...
You never told me - Cannot explain it - I just know these things ; )

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