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Discomposed

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How slowly turn the thoughts inside my head,

Searching for sentences that are not dead.

How difficult to find the looked for word,

Without descending into the absurd.

How hard it is to make a simple rhyme,

Yet poets do this nearly all the time.

Iambic phrases slip out easily,

But making sense is much too hard for me.

I reach for feelings, - but my thoughts are numb:

No passion, only cliché and humdrum.

What great themes shall I sing of? What lament?

My metres are prosaic; decadent.

I wait in silence to consult my muse;

Then switch on, in despair, the evening news.

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◄ As Autumn Leaves

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Dave Carr

Wed 1st Dec 2010 21:52

This is indeed a paradox.
Great stuff.
I'm glad there are still people out there writing heroic verse.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 28th Nov 2010 16:08

Well, at least you are not 'decomposing'. There are brilliant poems left in you. IMO, a poet needs to clean up the physical mess around him/her, ditch pills if possible, put a piece of blank paper on the table. and think of 10 ways to inspire a poem (workshop style). Nobody with wild, wonderful hair ever gives up. It is WRITTEN! Speaking of: IMO, the poem itself is a tad ordinary, but at least words are coming, however grudgingly. Love your titles.

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 27th Nov 2010 06:53

Oh Freda, I've got "writers' block", feel like nothing will ever inspire me again and anything that vaguely comes to mind is too tedious to bother with. Your poem touched me very much but also made me feel that we have all "been there." And can I order three moon calendars please? xx

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shoeless

Sat 27th Nov 2010 03:48

i woke tonight in the darkest hour, distressed beyond my own exsistence, it happens. thanks for leaving this poem here to distract me

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 27th Nov 2010 00:33

My God! I think it's just perfect. You are so right telling: "How hard it is to make a simple rhyme".
Love you fore that.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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