I know the places to caress
and kiss you to your little death
I'll slip my hand inside your dress
I know the places to caress
Let me alleviate your stress
until you pulse and catch your breath
I know the places to caress
and kiss you to your little death.
Works a treat!
:-)
Jx
What's a triolet then? Blimey, just nearly getting into them ghazal thingys! x
Isobel - that sounds like a challenge to me! ;)
Good stuff John - enjoyed this, must look up the form so I can torture myself a little more ;)
<Deleted User> (7212)
Tue 7th Dec 2010 23:10
Like it a lot - a little risque
<Deleted User> (7789)
Tue 7th Dec 2010 18:15
Great!
<Deleted User> (6315)
Tue 7th Dec 2010 17:26
I do enjoy the odd triolet or three John...and this one works oh so well..
Très bien John ; )
Je vais en faire un...
Are you absolutely sure about that Win?
Sounds like an irrisistible invitation John - though you struggle with erotic, you do saucy very well :)) x
Will we now see a wave of triolets sweeping across WOL I wonder?
Good one John you naughty boy :-)
Hi again John, not come across this form before, most interesting. Win x
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Lynn Dye
Tue 14th Dec 2010 15:24
Delightfully saucy, think that may work for me on occasions, lol.
Thank you John also for your lovely comments on my ghazal. x