muted,
struck uselessly dumb.
things that need to be said,
stifled.
clashes against
unrestained,
suffocating in words,
underwhelmed by insignificance,
drowned.
either way it's the same.
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change in style for you here, Kath - and it's certainly more fragmented or raw, but i like it...
it's a good job however you don't perform poetry (unless you have changed your mind) as i would hate to try and perform this...
keep em coming, chick x
Very bleak - good to see you here again. Hope you're well. xx
sounds like christmas Kath ? Win
From my experience the stifled is far, far worse than the unrestrained. With unrestrained you at least have a chance of one day being significant and starting to swim. It can happen - you just have to believe it.
Your poetry is so raw - it stirs a lot up for me. x
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Dave Bradley
Mon 3rd Jan 2011 23:42
Provokes a strong feeling of being trapped. Powerful one, Kath