Ruchill Park, Glasgow 10 a.m. 29th December 2010
The dear, black and white dog sees the ball,
chases the ball,
all it sees is the ball, and
it does not see the deer, and
for that I am grateful.
For the two deer,
ghosting spirit-like through lovely trees
in this ordinary urban park.
For the dog still by my side,
not disappearing after bobbing white rumps.
I am grateful for it all.
Two minutes and two hundred yards later,
in the same park, just down the slope,
a woman swigging a drink,
a bottle of spirits,
brandy I think.
Half-gone, like her.
The spirit of deer
and an old dear full of spirits.
What are you doing here, deer?
What are you doing here, dear?
Chris Co
Thu 3rd Feb 2011 15:54
Really good Dave, the reading of this at Moreton really made me think....not sure how I missed it first time round.
Good word play at the end of the second to last and last stanza, but not trivial- far from it.
Well written.
Chris