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For the Good Times

I can recall a manic monday

It was a rainy day in the month of June

Wait and return to a sixties and seventies tune

 

I recall silly jokes I used to send

usually on a Wednesday afternoon

and the 'almost' instant responses

 

I can recall barmy Summer nights

sitting on imitation leather chairs, laughing

about slippers and sweaty socks in odd pairs

 

I recall texted messages in multiples of ten

on Fridays or perhaps it would be on a Saturday night?

On weekdays too if my memory srves me right

 

I can recall being given a packet of chocolate biscuits

Poetic adventures; anger and frustration when lost

somewhere  between Manchester and Liverpool

 

I recall he said ''You're haunting me, you!''

and I should have said ''You haunt me too!''

Instead, I smiled and the moment was gone

 

like so many other precious moments

excepting the days when 'he' turns up unexpectedly

and then I look and I think to myself...

 

... and now that time has come

It really doesn't matter any more

He is just a memory now

as I recall songs from a very long time ago

the radio plays 'for the good times'

◄ Nightmare

Five, six, seven, eight... hair! ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (7164)

Tue 15th Feb 2011 21:06

Thanks Val :-)

Isobel - sad? regrets?
Sorry you feel sadness in this because it wasn't written in that mood and it wasn't meant to be regretful either. Just snippets from memories recalled while listening to music. Music does that to me :-)
Thanks for commenting though, it is appreciated and it helps to see how words affect people who read my stuff.xx

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Isobel

Tue 15th Feb 2011 15:24

Not sure how I missed this one. Very sad and reflective Janet. I like the subtlety of the haunting bit. The words you wished you said but didn't - the passing of moments that can't be revisited. I think many have regrets like that. Although I must say, I think I normally spit it out - apart from times when it is just not right to. Sometimes, things aren't for saying, ever.

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Val Cook

Mon 14th Feb 2011 11:03

Oh Janet, its lovely.X

<Deleted User> (7164)

Thu 10th Feb 2011 15:28

Thanks to all, you are very kind :-)

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Laura Taylor

Thu 10th Feb 2011 14:21

Aye, sweetly poignant this Janet - but if I get Manic Monday stuck in my head for the day after this, I'll be bloody haunting YOU! ;p

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Andy N

Thu 10th Feb 2011 08:14

love it, janet.. one of my favourites of yours so far and it's also defo one to be read / performed i think owning to the beat with it... top one!! xx

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Elaine Booth

Wed 9th Feb 2011 21:35

Such odd fragments we remember - you have caught this so well, Janet.

<Deleted User> (8943)

Wed 9th Feb 2011 16:18

Lovely poignancy...

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