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FLOUNDERING
Unabating
memories
scathing
if they could fade
disappear
into deep twilight's shade
I'd find rest and relief
yet my waiting's in vain
skies are moving
clouds
gathering
grey
overwhelming
constantly hovering
they catch my eye
they leave me floundering
<Deleted User> (8943)
Mon 21st Mar 2011 18:08
I know the feeling! Often wish my memories would bog off & give me a rest too. Nicely put John xXx
ps I love the new profile piccie - one can really see the likeness!
This is a bit of a change in style for you John. Don't recall you ever writing anything so dark or serious. Your poem is simple and stark - you express yourself well. x
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Elaine Booth
Mon 21st Mar 2011 20:05
Everything we said last Tuesday - love this poem. Really appreciate how succinct and evocative it is. x