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Burned at both ends,
thought train derails.
Time stops but tick remains
a midnight metronome.
Long minutes stretch
from small hours.
Start catches stop.
Comments
Lovely poem - particularly like "Time stops but tick remains" - wonderful line.
Hello Kath,
This little piece attracted my attention for a couple of lovely lines.
The tick remaining after the clock had stopped and start catching stop.
I only wish it had been longer, Well done! Graham.
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Andy N
Mon 11th Apr 2011 08:18
interesting piece, kath which i liked.. the last line is particularly effective but the full piece is top!
Hope you are good - Andy N x