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escape

consider my confusion

I cannot conceive the caption ‘escape’

as a coldly critical concept

I am quite incapable of articulating

artistically

the conundrum of  ‘escaping’

which must concur conclusively

with a ‘from what’ and a ‘to what’ question


correct me if I quibble

can I qualify curious contentment

at my conscious core

or am I in a vacuum

Courage or Comedy

what is the score

I seek… seek… I seek…

quantifiable conclusions


crikey

I am quite captured

by this k-k-k cacophony

I can’t escape… escape… escape…

esca… esca… esca…es…es…c...c....

carry me back to … ALBAQUERKEE !

a lurky kink quirks

I kwit



escape

◄ Sunset

the great fallacy ►

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Fkx

Mon 6th Jun 2011 10:40

I escape (into the world of literature) from the mundane and banal to the pristine and lofty world of poetics and art where the human soul can transcend its beholden state to what often seems a wearisome and hindering circumstance. Very provocative and thoughtful poem.

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Isobel

Sun 5th Jun 2011 12:40

Blimey Cyn - you are the philosopher of all philosophers! I love the way you analyse and question everything - there's no drifting with you.

'curious contentment at my conscious core' - you are very lucky if you have that - especially for a poet... it must have made writing about escape difficult though. It is great to have that balance within the theme though - zany and crazy ending - love it! xx

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Elaine Booth

Sat 4th Jun 2011 14:27

This IS great fun, Cynthia! Love the word play. X

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Lynn Dye

Sun 15th May 2011 13:52

Enjoyed this, Cynthia, a lot of fun.

Philipos

Sat 14th May 2011 21:45

Bit of levity that's what we need - well done CBT

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Francine

Sat 14th May 2011 20:58

A crazy fun read indeed!

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kealan coady

Sat 14th May 2011 14:43

really enjoyed this cynth, a smirky read of it and the conasance (speeled wrong) is brilliant. catches clarity clearly, could cry constantly keeping karma corrosively coherent.

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Jon

Fri 13th May 2011 20:36

a lurky kink quirks! Nonsensical,yes,but definetely fun! How we struggle for our art,Cynthia!

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Fri 13th May 2011 20:33

well I thought it good fun too!..infact gonna go back and see how fast I can read this..it would sound great read out loud :o))

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th May 2011 20:17

Nothing would come to me-NOTHING. So I opted for stupid. But it has been fun.

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