War-chest
My book-shelves are filled
with campaign medals
from battles with
an inadequate education.
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You had this up before, yes? I don't see any difference if I remember it correctly. It's really good. IMO, I would take out 'the' to move the line faster with more punch.
I enjoyed this - great metaphor.
Hi Tommy,
Like Isobel says, there's education and there's education. Methinks you're doing fine - we probably share similar libraries.
Regards,
A.E.
An interesting idea for a poem Tommy. My father had similar shelves. There is so much an adequate education can't teach you, also...
Good to see you back posting. I hope you are well. x
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Tommy Carroll
Tue 24th May 2011 01:46
hi thank you all: @CBT- no Cynthia I have never published this work. :o)