Beneath her Contemptuous Gaze

by Gus Jonsson

Wednesday 8th June 2011 6:18 pm

Somewhere underfoot beneath her contemptuous gaze

Grinding and crushing

Blood rushing to her head

Misting bloody red

Wine and roses lay scattered

Dreams and schemes splattered

Left then right spinning into the vicious plight awaiting

Cold, colder yet as cruellest roaring sea

Light her slender form struck out at me

Red pretty toenails sharp as razors pledge their jealous rage

Our open book closing upon that page for ever

I fall frozen stone over stone

Alone somewhere underfoot

Beneath her contemptuous gaze

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 15th Jun 2011 18:18

Thank you everyone for your comments ... you often hear about the fact that he deserved or deserves a 'Good Kick in The Balls' but I can assure you all that more than just your eyes water!

once again many thanks for reading

Gus

Cate Greenlees

Wed 15th Jun 2011 15:09

Powerful imagery here Gus, but I wouldnt want to be the one coming in for all that spleen!!
Cate xx

Andy N

Thu 9th Jun 2011 22:50

this isn't about Augusta is it, Gus? In fact haven't heard from a while - did she let you paint her? lol

Seriously, top stuff.. loved it.

See you soon hopefully (Am off next month - will give you a shout)

John Coopey

Wed 8th Jun 2011 23:13

You don't happen to have her telephone number, do you, Gus?

Ann Foxglove

Wed 8th Jun 2011 21:36

Glad to see you around the place again!:)

Isobel

Wed 8th Jun 2011 20:09

You've chosen my favourite line there Chris.

Lovely to have you on board Gus - I should have known you would find the pull of patent leather thigh length boots just too much to resist...

xx

Chris Co

Wed 8th Jun 2011 19:37

Red pretty toenails sharp as razors pledge their jealous rage

I like it- femme fatale

Chris

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