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Men and tears

 

Men

Macho Reluctant

Hiding Submerging Suppressing

Sadness     Joy   Failure      Celebration

Feeling   Crying   Weeping

Liberated Emotional

 Tears

diamante

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Elaine Booth

Tue 16th Aug 2011 13:16

Always great to see innovation of form. Nicely done, Dave. X

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 30th Jul 2011 14:46

A very good description of the emotional roller coaster men feel when asked to clean the loo! (Only joking!) :)

<Deleted User> (6315)

Sat 30th Jul 2011 14:13

The words work well in this form Dave..they move to their conclusion easily to my mind.

nice work :)

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