rallying
I’m glad the steam rally won’t be here again.
I can ride past on the 85 with no reminder.
Nothing to make me dwell on those three days each year
When you were so engrossed – in steam!
Although we had the ancient taxi – off the plate -
You had to go there on your bike - I bussed it.
It seemed so romantic, meeting up
as you removed your cycle clips
while I forked out the £2 for the programme.
We had to take a flask and sandwiches,
you wouldn’t pay for tea or things to eat.
That was a given. But for those three days
we were in heaven.
Sometimes a funny friend of yours would turn up,
all the way from London.
I would wish we had those three days to ourselves,
but never mind.
Each year I’d wonder if I should find myself
a stationary engine to play with
but I never did. And now you’re gone
what would I do with it?
A wondrous pall of smoke slithered over Aggie,
a smell of coal and oil, a lovely smell.
And, most moving moment of them all,
about two hundred engines in the field
as one, piped up and belted out a PEEEEEP
that always made me cry.
A defiant memory of all their years of toil
in such a far off time.
And now, in my far off time I am glad
the rally won’t be at St Agnes anymore.
One less memory to avoid
One more thing, once happiness, that now
would only make me sad.
And as I ride by, coming home from Truro on the bus
the field is full of silky golden corn.
No smoke, no crowds, no memories of us.
It's love not dirty coal that keeps me warm.
for Murray
Julian (Admin)
Thu 4th Aug 2011 09:00
This is writing at its best: worlds in grains of sand, the universal in the particular.
Honesty, humanity, without sentimentality.
If you are not submitting for magazines, you should be.