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My Florence

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Half a millennia of footsteps
crossed this courtyard,
five centuries of ghosts
hang around in doorways
as a bright, new moon
sits low in the sky,
offering no prayer
to small devils that spit at stars,
or a lost woman
who follows a different path.

Florence is full of magic boxes
spellbound by humanity,
and centuries of Christ.
Yet secrets hide behind huge doors
and apartments sway to a night,
where cornered sound betrays the ear
and silence…
is simply an afterthought.

This city knows me like no other.
Was it accident or luck that found me?
Where cobbles bite stilettos
and gypsy women curse sleep
beneath striped blankets,
their future protected by tiny Fiats
and lop-sided scooters,
sentinels of the years.

Tomorrow's house sparrows bring sun

and sun, indulgent mamas,

frilling up the ice cream parlour with heat.

There is always heat,

captured tonight,
by slim hemmed streets,
and to touch both walls
feels almost painless

 

 

◄ On Ice

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winston plowes

Sat 24th Sep 2011 13:53

Its many years since I have been there but this captures the noise, mystery, history and heat of the place. good stuff Stella. Win x

Philipos

Mon 29th Aug 2011 11:36

Since you asked I am suggesting 'or a lost female seeking a truer path', although I have no quibbles with what you have already written.

This is a lovely poem where,'spellbound by humanity,and centuries of Christ.Yet secrets hide behind huge doors....' has imagination running riot.

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Dave Bradley

Mon 29th Aug 2011 00:43

Very atmospheric - some lovely use of language here.

Damn - now I want to go there. It can be expensive reading poems about places.

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Rachel Bond

Mon 29th Aug 2011 00:17

love this. ive never been to florence, but i know the intamacy and exclusion of city love and life.
i respect and admire your writing stella, always have x

<Deleted User> (6315)

Sun 28th Aug 2011 23:27

Not sure of the last line of the first verse, the or a lost woman who follows a different path..left it in but will find out *hopefully what others think..

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chris stevenson

Sun 28th Aug 2011 23:06

...this is excellent..reminded me of a warm night in a small Toledo bar in the medieval city walls..overhearing a girl ordering tomatoes with olive oil...huge heavy wooden doors hiding shadows..




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