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Feeling OK...

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Today is a Chanel day.
A Coco Chanel
and chocolate day.
 
Don't ask me why?
I just sense it as
September rain, still warm
swathes a tired summer.

And who am I to object?

This day warms me,
I feel good inside
and I would have you
  see the beauty
  with me.
  In me.

Calvin sulks,
I laugh, tell him
"your time will come."

But just for today
when each fruit is heavy
and each bird is blue.

This day can only be
  for Chanel.

 

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Hazel

Sat 1st Oct 2011 00:15

I enjoyed this very much Stella.
Hazel

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Dave Bradley

Sun 4th Sep 2011 23:37

Enjoyed this Stella. I don't use Chanel myself, but the chocolate sounds nice. .

Philipos

Sun 4th Sep 2011 18:37

Very witty - loved it.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Sep 2011 09:08

Sounds lovely. I enjoyed the poem too.

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Isobel

Sun 4th Sep 2011 08:58

Oooo I want a Coco Chanel and chocolate day too - but I'm heavily committed to watching monkeys shit and rip my car apart (Knowsley Safari Park)...

The poem is lovely - very gentle and warming and original - very original! xx

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Lynn Dye

Sun 4th Sep 2011 01:16

Enjoyed this very much, Stella, good one. x

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 21:45


hi Stella.

I,m in'klein'ed to say
this is a lovely airy
optimistic poem,
ideal for la femme.

I can almost whiff
what,with hands up has the perfume
of something that shall remain
non-present on my wifes dressing table.

haha! as if not!
if it did,nt,I would speechless
lying on a cold slab.

this leaves a lovely lingering odour
unlike the onion-like smell
of my arm-pits after a day
of d.i.y in t'hot sun.

cheers Stella.

Stef.

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