only fools
the only way to burst a balloon
is to
believe
that the gases inside it
exist
to inflate
add a little helium
and that little bit of plastic
might rise.
once i put my name
and address on a tag
cos as a child i was delighted
a stranger might find it
and write to me.
the balloon burst somewhere
like a hopeful bubble
and i thought
of the address tag lying in the gutter.
i dont do balloons anymore.
just pleasure in stamping on them
and hearing the bang like a miniature gunshot.
smililng to see its impact all arround me.
that the noise hs found me centre of attention.
but still its not about me.
just a big bang and some gases.
<Deleted User> (9801)
Tue 25th Oct 2011 19:34
I think it's very well written, I like, you express your feelings and you let people into your thoughts, but so easy to read! I have to try free verse xx