Who is this woman in
the mirror?
When did her hair start
to turn grey?
What happened to the
young girl who used to
laugh and play?
Who is this woman in
the mirror?
When did these
wrinkles appear?
What happened to the
young girl whose parents
used to call "Dear"?
Who is this woman in
the mirror?
When did her eyes
dull with age?
What happened to the
young girl whose life
was an empty page?
Who is this woman
in the mirror?
Luckily, physical deterioration is not something that affects we men!
Seriously, Shirley, another nice post.
Nice ideas in here. I would be tempted to turn the my into her, just to increase the sense of alienation cos I think its implicit that it's you. On a personal level, aging is blummin scary. I'd recommend eye drops and high lights. This girl's going down fighting ;-) x
song element here, Shirley to me which is really nice.
I may consider breaking this up a little bit, as it may make it flow better but i still enjoyed it.. keep em coming x
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John Coopey
Mon 3rd Oct 2011 15:00
Luckily, physical deterioration is not something that affects we men!Seriously, Shirley, another nice post.
Oops! Here I am again!