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Shortlist

Americano

Cable Car

Hollywood

Redheaded Slut

Screwdriver

Pearl Harbour

Mudslide

Banshee

Tomahawk

Fuzzy Navel

Sombrero

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Francine

Mon 10th Oct 2011 15:24

Yes, this was way too cryptic, Ray, but now I find it interesting as you've told us a story through the names of cocktails!

p.s. I have only ever heard of two of them - Screwdriver and Fuzzy Navel!

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Isobel

Mon 10th Oct 2011 15:05

Yikes - think I would have needed to be psychic to work that one out! Now I understand, I see more humour in it though. Maybe you could give us some explanations and ask us to put the cocktails to it next time.... xx

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Ray Miller

Mon 10th Oct 2011 14:56

You're not the only one by any means, Isobel. It's a list of shorts/cocktails. Shortlist. One is meant to discern in the narrative arc a night of debauchery
Americano - a yank

Cable Car - on top of the world

Hollywood - living the dream

Redheaded Slut - he meets a girl

Screwdriver - speaks for itself?

Pearl Harbour - suddenly the drink takes its toll

Mudslide - things get messy and slide downhill

Banshee - she's not too good, either

Tomahawk - and she has a tomahawk

Fuzzy Navel - things calm down, you try to contemplate and make sense but...

Sombrero - you're out.



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Isobel

Mon 10th Oct 2011 14:12

Sorry - it's lost on me. You'll have to explain it. I did think it was an odd poem. I like to understand stuff though - so if you would be so good...

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Ray Miller

Sat 8th Oct 2011 22:17

Thanks, Isobel and Steve. Did you apprehend the narrative arc?

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Ray Miller

Fri 7th Oct 2011 16:46

You asking?

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Isobel

Fri 7th Oct 2011 15:21

What about a long, hard, comfortable screw up against a wall?

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