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Oh eck!

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Postman's been- no cheque,.

Woman next door's a Pole- not a Czech.

I left the gas lit- I better check.

I don't like stripes- I prefer check.

This poem's pointless- oh dear.

 

words and foto- Tommy Carroll

 

◄ This is not a vodka; ginger, ice and lime

My loose checked tie ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6315)

Thu 17th Nov 2011 20:01


Ha! Check you cheque has not been nicked by the Czech who wears checks..just to be sure oh dear.. :)

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Lynn Dye

Tue 15th Nov 2011 15:27

Made me chuckle! :-D

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John Coopey

Tue 15th Nov 2011 14:44

Nothing wrong with pointless poetry.

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Isobel

Tue 15th Nov 2011 14:13

Not pointless cos it made me smile and I've not felt like doing that for a while.

I just love the way the last line doesn't scan. xx

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