I'm losing it
I'm losing it
I'm stood right here
refusing it
an ice cold one
that shouts-
'get gone!'
that thrills of
my abusing it
I excuse myself
a ruse myself
excuses me and
I myself
deny myself
a lift from
this Moscow mule
that i drive myself
I'm losing it
I'm losing it
I'm giving in
and chosing it.
Words and foto T. Carroll
Great stuff. Its marghrita time. (Why is there no spell check on this pointless thing) Win ;-)
Enjoyed this Tommy - you did make me want to booze at lunchtime though ;)
Ahhh... the anxiety of what to do when faced with temptation!
I like the rythm and rhyme you've got going on in this Tommy. It kind of mirrors the fight going on inside. That's one drink I've never tried :)
Enjoyed this, Tommy, I suddenly got very thirsty!
:o)
Thank you Stella, I'll treat you to one...and watch you gob-a-gag drinking it :o)
Thank you Noetic-fret, I surpass myseld at denial :o)
I must admit, you have me drooling at the mouth. i used to drink this all the time. Moscow mule, and Im feeling for you. right now i could do with one.
big thanks
noetic-fret!
<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 28th Oct 2011 19:14
Because of the title..arghh...all I can think of now is vodka ginger ice and lime...Think this is a fiesty write..smashin stuff.. :)
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Isobel
Wed 16th Nov 2011 21:44
Yes - I do think your poetry is getting stronger and stronger. Perhaps that is an indication that you are in better spirits - pardon the pun! x