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Pour Tous Les Jours

Le Piscine est ouvert from ten thirty  

to seven, we’re stationed

in a caravan opposite La Chute.

I purchase le pain and watch the early

arrivals undress for the occasion,

form into trains and whoosh!

 

Les anglais sont ici, next to nothing

on bodies outstaring

the sun. Some pose for the camera, some close

their eyes before the drama and plummet,

the mid-stream screams of terror are tearing

the caws out of the crows.

 

I carry the clothes, les enfants wear floats

and goggles. A guard blows

on a whistle -  nous regardons L’Autre.

Sound drowns in water when cut from young throats,

thrown back and forth at the walls – I’m exposed

to everyday torture.

 

These kids are brainwashed and lose their marbles

each time they go under.

Depersonalised; je vois et attends

for their heads to emerge from the bubbles.

Je ne sais pas this one from another

and wave at tout le monde.

 

Beneath Le Piscine, Le Disco begins!

From the upper chamber,

music drips and small hands entwine with mine;

synthesised suffering, we dance and sing

to Bob the Builder, La Macarena

and Mambo Number Nine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Francine

Fri 2nd Dec 2011 02:10

I like the craziness of this, and obviously for the French, which is what caught my eye initially... and it's La Piscine ; )

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Dave Carr

Tue 22nd Nov 2011 21:03

Come off it Ray.
I bet you do a mean Macarena.
I love the snippets of french - just enough to give it a satirical edge. And 'tearing the caws out of the crows'
Dave

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Ray Miller

Tue 22nd Nov 2011 19:47

Thanks very much, Stella and Andy.Holidays are hell, wherever you have them.

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Andy N

Tue 22nd Nov 2011 11:03

really enjoyed this, Ray.. if i am honest - not sure over the whoosh however..

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Mon 21st Nov 2011 21:39



hmm two of your favourtie pastimes then?..

Loved the way you set the scene Ray..form trains then whoooosh! I also enjoyed these kids are brainwashed too..nice work. :)

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