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Portrait

All incense and fragility, bringing death

to slow music and the absence of weight

that’s felt in your footsteps is the fading

of favourite songs. She accumulates

causing peripheral blindness, lunar

eclipses and narrowing eyelids

obscuring familiar haunts. White powdered 

exquisitely porcelain shoulders, bound  

by black satin, faint lipstick smudges

and traces of blood on the tongue. Love is

posthumous, requesting no flowers,

artless inscriptions, the wearing of weeds

and your portrait judiciously hung.

 

 

◄ It's Closing Time in the Gardens of the West

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Ray Miller

Fri 9th Dec 2011 10:04

Thanks for your comments.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Thu 8th Dec 2011 14:19


This is quite wonderful Ray..

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Matt Tilke

Thu 8th Dec 2011 11:23

Beautiful, a truly inspired price. I thoroughly enjoyed that.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 8th Dec 2011 10:37

Love that last line

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 8th Dec 2011 07:53

Great - the blood on the tongue sends a tingle!

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