Prose Upon The River
River Estate Retrospective
perfect pattern paving built for hopscotch
roads wide as the dirty River Mersey
side to street a hundred feet
plenty space for kerby
plenty more for ollies green smashed to glass
and smithereens by Kevin Roberts dobber
in the gutter
twenty pair maternal eyes gazing from the glazing
behind the nets nothing goes unnoticed
every single misdemeanour noted and transmitted
supersonic bulletins of social misbehaviour
dispatches travel faster than the speed of sound or light
penance follows quicker than a wink
dirtyscary spiderwebbed salvationary bog
lacked electric light and inner lock
on the outside by the alleyway
saviour of the careless child
rescued us from shaming yellow knickers
piddled all the quicker on the cold and snowy days
secondhanded vehicles the weekend entertainment
forehead scratchers crowd around the one remaining Haynes
consulting oily oracle, extrapolating data
communicating contradicting estimating engine parts
sorting out solutions on the cheap, collectively
see the scrappy bargainswap a favour for the spares
as winter sunshine sinks beneath the farmerfield rise
teatime dishes clatter onto tables laying down
butter placed before the fire for half an hour ‘s heat
plates are warmed and so it seems that every single family
is eating Irish stew tonight
going by the smell upon the River
River Estate Epilogue
The kids don’t play at hopscotch anymore
They don’t know where the River Mersey is
The spaces played for marbles are now taken up with parking
and you cannot see the kerbstones for the cars
Kevin’s doing seven years for dealing
I scored myself a first class Lit degree
Last year I moved out of council housing
Sick of cold and mouldy living rooms
Sick of clothes not drying on the horse
Sick of perma-wheezing and badly managed schemes
Conditions made us sick before our time
Housewives work at Tesco now, they never see the crimes
Reportage died when husbands lost their jobs
Their secretary skills became important, finally,
in the service sector following the 80s
Dinner ladies arse wipers floor moppers, all
They barely made it through the last recession
Kids don’t need an outside bog - they never leave the house
Paedobear and leccy games now occupy their time
instead of kerby, kick the can, chalky hopscotch, water fights
Pampered little fauntleroys?
At least they’re warm and dry and safe inside
But can we say their innocence remains?
When they hear the Call of Duty and respond with present arms?
More traffic on the road than we ever thought could fit
Credit makes that new Passat affordable
Oily oracle consulted still but each car has a copy
Matched to fit the vehicle and bought for sale online
Scrappy’s still in business but you can’t look for your own
It’s a service garage MOT place now
No bargainswaps for sale just a final fix-up fee
The rise is now obscured by lego housing laid down quick
Additions to the landscape expanded our estate
No one eats at teatime now or sits around a table
It’s olive spread upon the bread eaten for the benefit
Irish stew has been replaced by microwaving chemicals
The smell upon the River stinks tonight
Barbi Touron
Wed 7th Mar 2012 20:07
Thank you, for real, we are is some serious trouble, our environment is as ill as society. The tap water in NY can be set on fire due to natural gas leaking in to the water pipes. We need to bring back hopscotch and kick the can. I love these things but there is no going back. Now we just have to figure out how to clean the river and take the fire out of the water. Best wishes