CCTV
Hi Dave, you certainly achieved that sense of detatchment. At what point did the idea for the acrostic occur?
Hi Isobel - yes it is on the darker side, hehe.
Originally it was titled CCT - the extra line was added some time later to add CCTV - but with the intention of further expansion that I haven't got around to as yet. However it seemed a suitable example of my occasional deviation from rhyme. ;)
The trouble is that as I never filed such items separately from rhymers, looking them out taxes my memory somewhat, hehe. I did locate a couple more though, so I will post those soon...
Hi Yvonne, thanks for commenting. I was aiming to project an air of detachment which might be appropriate for both characters - with rather differing motives of course. ;)
Best wishes, Dave
Oooo - a twist in more ways than one at the end. I'm wondering if you could have got rid of those last two lines though - just to make it a perfect acrostic poem.
So this is Dave Dunn doing non rhyming poetry - I shall watch out for you on a dark night LOL!
I love stories with a macabre twist at the end!
Well done, the choice of adverbs - 'fastidioiusly', 'lovelessly', 'effortlessly', 'jauntily' are so effective.
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Dave D Poet Rhumour
Sun 26th Feb 2012 14:33
Hi Yvonne, the Acrostic was the framework for the tale - originally without the last line, with the short title CCT as an abbreviation of the acrostic words.
I will probably extend it properly in time - or maybe write a sequel. :)
Best wishes, Dave