If I Only Had The Words
Trapped inside my brain
Ten thousand fledglings wait
Each sparkling with hope
Within this hopeless state.
In their unfettered world
They jostle to be free,
Yet one by one the flame is gone –
They shrink and die in me.
Oh! Womb of future past
Where birth pains sear,
Ambitions fear
And Creativity
Disappears,
In darkest night
My dreams take flight
As they aspire
To cast their light.
This living Tower of Troy,
This dried-up seed of joy,
Wherein lie all my hopes, still free,
This silent cell without a key.
For I would give my all
If but my thoughts were heard.
Come – free me from my silence –
If I only had the words!
Yvonne Brunton
28-01-04
Rhys David Eyles
Tue 6th Mar 2012 01:02
As a general rule I tend not to appreciate rhyming unless used sparingly, but your work seems to fit quite neatly with the world of rhyme, I have to say I love the way you make it seem much more natural, making it seem as if the rhyming is just a coincidence, allowing the poem to flow that little bit easier. Very good.