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Telescopes and Things

Telescopes don’t make good gifts
not like tellies, or drums.
Tellies you can switch off
drums you can bang
say 
“Look at me
I’m here
Hear me!”

But telescopes,
telescopes feed the enquiring mind
with no answers
just starry, starry nights
and black holes
insignificance to the power of 20 12
magnified
through one cold lens

And Science is an empty room
with carbon in the grate
the writing on the wall
that speaks in formulas
not words
the nail in the palm
of the hand that holds the scope

So put away your paper, the scissors and the bow
kneel before your telescope
and cry.

 

◄ Love's Labour's Lost

Unconditional ►

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nick armbrister

Thu 3rd May 2012 20:01

a telescope has an invisible statement wrote on the side 'Use Me!'

this reminds me of my old telescope when i was a teen. many memories brought on by this.

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Jon

Sun 18th Mar 2012 11:54

Hi Isobel
Really enjoyed this one-quite bold and in your face regarding the subject matter. Unusual to see something posted that extols the virtues of faith. Especially liked the last stanza! x

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Nick Coleman

Tue 13th Mar 2012 16:36

Good words. Though surprisingly I do have faith in science, and the more science attempts to explain the more mysteries it uncovers.

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Isobel

Tue 13th Mar 2012 16:29

Thanks everyone - you seem to have picked up on the essentials and the mood. This piece is about faith and science. Faith gives hope. Science undermines faith. Therefore science removes hope. I tried to put it into a formula but words are bettter for some things.

The best gift we can give anyone is faith. That only tends to works with kids though. Adults make their own minds up - or maybe just see through their parents.

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Ray Miller

Mon 12th Mar 2012 13:59

I think the 3rd verse is very good, a poem in its own right, really - maybe formulae would be better, accentuate the estrangement. It's perhaps nothing to do with this poem but it reminded me of the programme on TV last night, Orbit: Earth's Extraordinary Journey.Cold and lonely space etc.I felt awed and depressed at the same time.But the gift theme, tellies and drums, feels like summat more personal.What we leave to our children?

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 12th Mar 2012 11:19

I sense a little mischief between creationism and evolutionism in this piece Isobel. Is this an inner demon? Could it be the noisy you fighting with the thinking you? There is frustration here and also defiance. I really like its opposites.

Regards, Graham

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