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Daddy's Child

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As our boys come home today wreathed not in glory but in flags

 

 

You never knew your daddy, child.

You never saw his smile.

Your baby hands and baby smile

Will never him beguile.

You never felt his arms so strong

Yet tender, full of care

You never felt his arms so sweet

Brush gently o’er your hair.

You’ll never hear him sing you songs

At bedtimes, full of sleep.

You’ll never hear him say

‘My love for you is true and deep’.

He isn’t here to comfort you

When filled with pain and sorrow,

He isn’t here to hearten you

With hope for your tomorrow.

He won’t be here to share your joy

At your hard – earned successes,

Nor here to catch you when you fall

If troubled by life’s stresses.

 

For 'you', read ‘me’, as he is too –

I see him in your smile

And thus will I to both be true

For he lives on in ‘Daddy’s  Child.’

 

 

 

 

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 21st Mar 2012 13:39

Would that be "hands so sweet" in the context
and considering what went before? My own
father who survived WW1 and was in uniform again for WW2 died when I was too young to remember him -
so I empathise with the sentiment...albeit that
children are both resilient and adaptable to
circumstance...and perhaps only consider their
loss properly when they are much older.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 20th Mar 2012 22:30

Nice poem Yvonne.xx

<Deleted User> (10185)

Tue 20th Mar 2012 21:59

very touching

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Lynn Dye

Tue 20th Mar 2012 21:35

Hi Yvonne, I agree with Nick - effective and touching. Well done.

<Deleted User> (10123)

Tue 20th Mar 2012 21:00

Tears to the eyes: particularly with the six Yorkshire soldiers back on home turf. Effective and extremely touching. Tankyou Yvonne, Great Stuff. Ta muchly, Nick.

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