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I'd call it Tetractys but I can't Spell it

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( AKA)Lovely  Jubbley

               I

               Once had

               Frozen  ice,

Tasting orange

In a wax-covered cardboard tetractys.

 

Maybe it was just a tetrahedron

Sloped sides full of

orange ice.

It was

Nice.

 

with thanks to J silkstone for introducing me to this medium.

Whoooo    Whoooo    Is there anybody there?

 

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (10123)

Sat 24th Mar 2012 08:56

Oh Dear me, the loonies have escaped again. This is a good little exercise for them grey cells. Me only got one and don't want to spoil it, so I'll leave this to the experts. Ta muchly, Nick.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 23rd Mar 2012 21:55

Sucking the life out of them
till you are left with a block of ice

A bit like the effect
that two people we both know experienced-lol!

But are best left nameless
shhhh!

Loved it....the poem we mean(ha)

By the way,speaking of orange
do you remember a 'Mr. Quorange'dilute drink?

How I far from envied the unfortunate person,who in 'them' days had the most embarrassing job of walking around,advertising it in our shopping centre dressed(for the want of a much more terrible word)in a large plastic orange.Not exactly the ideal thing to have to do in summertime-lol!
P&S.xx

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