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Well he’s off to Nova Scotia in the morning

Where the whales sing and ice burgs touch the sky

He’s tired of the fusty stale old workhouse

And he needs the salty sea to spark his eye.

 

He remembers when he was a child of nine years old

To Newfoundland he surely found his way

The ocean was his home

Wherever he did roam

And Penzance was a lonely place to stay.

 

Well he’s off to Nova Scotia in the morning

His bag is packed his paints are put away

He’s had enough of haunting Back Road West you see

And he’s off to Nova Scotia for the day.

 

Last night in Harrys Court he came a knocking

He told me that the experts had it wrong.

Just cos in about half a dozen photographs

He was looking rather sad, his face was long.

 

He laughs and tells me that the sea’s his lover

His paintings they don’t really mean a thing

They’re just an aide memoire, a quick reminder

Of how it is to live and laugh and sing.

 

He wants to go to where the whales are calling

And ice burgs they are big as any town

The waves get up as high as Truro’s Cathedral spire

And there’s no-one there to try and bring him down.

 

 

So he’s off to Nova Scotia in the morning

Back to when he was a little lad

He’s leaving this behind

All his troubles of every kind

To go where the whales sing and men are glad.

 

 

 

alfred wallis

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Hugh

Tue 17th Jul 2012 14:07

Just read your anthwology article this would get my top vote--the audio version of course.Brilliant!!

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Hugh

Tue 17th Jul 2012 13:53

That is soo good ,a sad song but so relaxing to hear you singing it .Well done .

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Baarbaara Sheep

Thu 7th Jun 2012 17:25

So beautiful, leaving all your troubles behind for a beautiful adventure..

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John Coopey

Sun 8th Apr 2012 22:46

Lovely vioce,Ann. I won't be the first to say the name Sandy Denny to you, will I?

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Lynn Dye

Thu 5th Apr 2012 13:32

Enjoyed this very much, Ann, I found it quite reflective too, and well sung. xx

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 4th Apr 2012 17:06

Well done Anne. This is lovely. There are, as has been mentioned, a few hiccoughs with the scansion but I love the tune you have as I agree with you that this is less a rollikin' song and has more a reflective mood with a hint of poignancy. xx

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 4th Apr 2012 16:39

Sad or sadistic (see "Drunken Sailor"), words like these can be sung softly or belted out with equal effect...popular with those living life on the edge.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 4th Apr 2012 07:31

Thanks guys - it was just an off the cuff little song I admit. I haven't written anything much all year - lost the knack a bit - so it's good to get something out there. I'm surprised it's struck you both as jolly and rollicking - it's supposed to be a bit sad! :)

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 4th Apr 2012 01:32

"He's Off To Nova Scotia In The Morning"! Just the right title for a rollicking (thanks,Freda) full-blown shanty.
"Heave-ho, me hearties,
We'll sing it at Foxglove's parties!"
(Oh - it's "icebergs").
On a technical note...I go along with the comments from Freda. The material can surely adapt to a little tinkering that leaves the enjoyable exuberance intact.

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Freda Davis

Tue 3rd Apr 2012 21:38

Excellent ballad Ann,
a few quibbles. If you leave out 'the' in the last line it scans better. The line before that has some extra syllables too, that interrupt the rhythm. Most of the stanzas work very well. I am puzzled by 'high's Truro's Cathedral Spire' because the awkwardness with the rhythm is in the three syllables of Cathedral, and is not changed by contracting 'high as' to 'high's'.
They are just quibbles though. This is fun and bouncy, and rollicks along nicely.

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