100 metres
Thump thump
Thudda thump
Thump 'On your marks'
Thudda thudda thudda
Thudda thump thump thump
Breathe thudda thu... 'Get set'
Twitch, thudda, thudda, thudda
Tense, breathe, thudda, thud, thud,
Tense, br... 'Crack! ' thudda
One: Go! Go! Go! Stride!
Two: Go! Push! Thudda thud thud thud
Three: Go! Stride! Push thudda
Four: Stride burn stride
Five: Burn stride thudda
Six: Thudda push thud
Seven: Grit stride burn thudda
Eight: Go stretch thudda stretch
Nine: Push stride dip
Thudda thudda breathe gasp breathe gasp
pain, nausea, breathe, noise.
Thudda Thudda
Is the roar for me?
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 27th Aug 2012 11:56
Excellent. Very imaginative, and hits hard emotionally.