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Beyond the beige

And everyday tasks,

And the re-emergence

Of discarded new ideas,

Lies a truth.



Look under the layers

Of used tissues

To the heart of things.

The matter’s root.



Listen to the sounds between the clock ticks

for the meaning of time passing.



Then dig through the pie crust.

Devour what lies beneath.



And rinse and spit.

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Philip Stevens

Tue 10th Oct 2017 00:52

The spirit is cleansed

tony sheridan

Sat 1st Dec 2012 18:54

And rinse and spit. Great line. Love this poem! Take care, Tony.

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Anthony Emmerson

Sat 1st Dec 2012 16:46

Very profound and enjoyable Joy. This was my favourite line:

"Listen to the sounds between the clock ticks

for the meaning of time passing."

Made me think; an activity for which I have a paucity of equipment.

Regards,
A.E.

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Isobel

Sat 1st Dec 2012 09:18

I love this Joy.

I don't normally like title-less poems, but I'll make an exception for this - it seems appropriate.

I love the imagery and I love the hard hitting nature of it and I love the flow. The poem gives me that tingle you feel when something just connects.

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