Nativity
Bethlehem is bolted shut
and there no jobs in this England
The innkeepers hold cardboard doors
and he been on his bike so long
That say no room and we full up
for twenty, forty miles and more
An angel’s crying for her mum
and he has turned his cycle round
The shepherd cannot find his flock
and wise men have all been and gone
The donkey’s ears have fallen off
and I have seen his ears stand
While fathers laugh and mothers blub
at mention of the foreign man
The night is peeling off the wall
who undercuts the living down
As heaven crashes to the stage
and I can’t bear to watch my own
All captured by the mobile phone
but there’s no call for you, my son,
For Bethlehem is bolted shut
and there no jobs in this England.
Anthony Emmerson
Mon 10th Dec 2012 12:07
Hi Ray,
Topical (on two fronts) and inventive, but these lines lost me:
"and I have seen his ears stand"
"who undercuts the living down"
Maybe it's part of the colloquial you are using, or maybe (more likely) me being thick.
Regards,
A.E.