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Nativity

Bethlehem is bolted shut

and there no jobs in this England

The innkeepers hold cardboard doors

and he been on his bike so long

That say no room and we full up

for twenty, forty miles and more

An angel’s crying for her mum

and he has turned his cycle round

The shepherd cannot find his flock

and wise men have all been and gone

The donkey’s ears have fallen off

and I have seen his ears stand

While fathers laugh and mothers blub

at mention of the foreign man

The night is peeling off the wall

who undercuts the living down

As heaven crashes to the stage

and I can’t bear to watch my own

All captured by the mobile phone

but there’s no call for you, my son,

For Bethlehem is bolted shut

and there no jobs in this England.

 

◄ Alf Ramsey - My Part In His Success

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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 10th Dec 2012 12:07

Hi Ray,

Topical (on two fronts) and inventive, but these lines lost me:

"and I have seen his ears stand"

"who undercuts the living down"

Maybe it's part of the colloquial you are using, or maybe (more likely) me being thick.

Regards,
A.E.

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Isobel

Fri 7th Dec 2012 23:28

This is a bit of a depressing one, smack before Christmas. It is sadly true for many though.

I'm with Francine on those last few lines - they pack some punch, particularly if you are a parent. The likelihood of our kids owning a house gets slimmer by the decade as well as the chance of them ever paying off their education.

But if anyone feels like slitting their wrists, don't do it before the next Tudor, which is on this Thursday. The innkeeper's door will definitely be made of wood and it's welcomed folk for as long as the name suggests!

Merry Christmas to you Sid, Francine, Mike :) xxx

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Francine

Fri 7th Dec 2012 23:20

Great ending to this Ray.

'but there’s no call for you, my son,
For Bethlehem is bolted shut
and there no jobs in this England.'

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Mike Hilton

Fri 7th Dec 2012 15:05

Very clever and enjoyable Sid.

Take care
Mike

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