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whalesong

I walked 52 countries wide 

my feet weary and bruised. 

i let the tide wash over them,

52 lovers all die, a muse.

With the crashing of a wave,

their indifference

to the sounds i make,

to the waves of frequency running 

through my brain.

8 hertz and 8 hurts,

A stranger

in every town,

speaking the tongues 

of the Pentecost.

 

i sit on the beach 

at the tip of  circumference 

of this long reach

there is not a human man 

that knows my pain,

but i teach it to the sky and call the birds

for even they know their own song if in vain.

And 24 blackbirds flew around me

until the raven cawed,

till the sea clawed me back

 

No human babe

cries for my milk

i am damp with scales

i find company with mermaids

sewing their aquatic silk

around their tails

swimming and singing

for a sailor

to feed their dissatisfied wails

 

The lonely all fall into the deep,

where posiedon weeps

an anthropomorphic balm

so even the whales know

how to cast asunder,

the ocean thunders on 

 overwhelming 

us to think

the song 

of the whales  

is about us.

The stars above 

try to tell us.

We are one.

All except one.

We devise our own reasons

for the cross,

and so for the lost, 

we blame gods biology.

There are too many people

and not enough space for the whales.

Something has to put a stop to this,

someone, a sacrifice,

a sacrificial song

52 hertz, they named him his words

and his specialness preserved him

and us

for always.

Till the echo rounds the curve.

 

52 hertz

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Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 14th Jul 2013 10:13

second?...!!..no way dude!THIS is OUR number one
and you are the number one poet meistress!xx

<Deleted User> (9821)

Wed 19th Jun 2013 16:00

nice

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Rachel Bond

Mon 27th May 2013 04:26

thanks andy and solar.

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Andy N

Fri 24th May 2013 12:45

particularly like the second stanza here, rach but it's a strong piece all round

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 24th May 2013 12:01

reading this great piece Rachel,
has turned me into an addict-
for more!more!more!

and...a.s.a.p.x

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Rachel Bond

Wed 22nd May 2013 00:33

thank you stefan and francine for your kind comments x

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 21st May 2013 23:14

King of Whales? never!poetry princess? dah!

if this poem was an eatable item,
we could feed on it till 'ell froze over!xx

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Francine

Tue 21st May 2013 17:18

Profound thoughts and feelings as it takes you on its spiritual journey!
Once again Ms. Bond - you do not disappoint!

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Rachel Bond

Tue 21st May 2013 14:25

thanks i went a bit over the top there, i was just in mood. youre right, zillions of interpretations :)

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Isobel

Tue 21st May 2013 07:47

I'm as fascinated by your response as I am by your poem! Yes - it's really hard not wanting to explain your poem to the world - I'm the same with mine - poetry is about communication for me - ideas, thoughts, feelings - I need that flow of exchange - perhaps we are both 52 Hertzers, but unfortunately of the same sex :))

I find it amazing how you can write a poem thinking it is obvious but then find it interpreted in completely different ways by others - and then when you re-read it, you see exactly why - cos it CAN have those zillion different interpretations.

I didn't know that information about the brain and depression - it does re-inforce what a lottery your own personal psyche is - at the end of a day we are all just a collection of chemicals.

x

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Rachel Bond

Tue 21st May 2013 01:41

thank you isobel.

the end is as you suggest for me about the special and the different and it does reference christ in his uniqueness. there is a great sadness in the story of 52 hertz, i have packed a lot in but yes it talks of boundaries and perceptions, what it is to be the last of the line so to speak. to break a cycle...the word passion is actually derived from the meaning for suffering.
the pentacost is a festival celebrating the lives of the disciples who in witnessing the reurrection become touched by gods spirit and are enabled to spread the gospel to further countries by developing ability to speak in unknown languages. It is pentacost now n the christian calender. the church is seeking to develop missionary in the form of practical application and social provision into the 21st century not just in other ountries but developing charitable efforts in this country on our own poverty struck streets, in this way the efoorts of man span ages of time as the whale spans the hugeness of space...52 is alone in the inability of all of his species to understand his language. he is described as a 'cockney in scotland' i like the link between his story and that of human language and communication and the scientific understanding of emotional frequencies...
my heart was saddened to the depths to think of the last and lost lonely great whale and there is a link with christs sadness on the cross. the story of 52 inspired the write of many a lonely woman to its researchers identifying with his plight...anthropomorphism is the telling of the human plight through the symbolic reference of that outside it. we seek to understand ourselves through animal behaviour. scientists remind us that 52s story could be from a wider perspective as ever reminding us of the divine, however we understand it. i could write for ever about it but i hope im not spoiling the poem...

this is a great topic i loved writing this x thank you again isobel for the research

thanks for your comments i hope we get lots more lovely poems about such an inspiring idea xx

interesting:

the human brain resonates at 6-8 Hertz...anything lower than this is said to be a cause/symptom of depression.
52Hertz sings out of range because his mating calls are too HIGH a frequency amongst his species.. is he happiest?

52 (highest whalesong)divide by 8 (max human brain freq) = 6.5 somewhere mid the healthy range for a human...maybe thats why we find it so relaxing and engrossing..(52 - 8) over 8 = 5.5 kind of healthy range still 44 Hertz beyond our hearing i assume. 44 over 52 = 0.8 hertz..fancy that. anybody good at maths please correct. i like that all numbers result between 5.5 and 8 H ( human brain freq )apart from 0.8 which is still an 8

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Isobel

Mon 20th May 2013 20:36

Yay - at last we have lift off! Thanks for writing such an epic piece Rachel - I would have taken me several seasons to have written anything like this.

Your poem has had me googling like crazy cos I like to try to get my head round references a poet makes and I've now learnt one new word and a scientific fact!

I love the religious connotations that run throughout and the way you go from the personal to the universal.

Your thoughts at the end are not obvious - I'm guessing you are saying that man makes too much of himself. We seek to identify with the specialness of the whale - when in fact the whale is superior, unique - Christ like, I suppose...

'Till the echo rounds the curve' is a great line to finish with - it leaves so much for us to ponder on.

I love the ideas in this. x

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Rachel Bond

Mon 20th May 2013 18:15

a first draft..more for the enjoyment than competition although if you do all vote me king of the whales i will be pleased :)

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