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One wheel on my wagon

So I’m not rolling along

I know you’ll scoff –

Cos one fell off

The holiday

was then passé

Gert’s not singing a happy song.

 

One wheel on my wagon

You’re better off if there’s two

And though absolved

no-one’s involved

And me and Gert

are both unhurt

But the tailback has formed quite a queue.

 

(They were singing-)

 

Why was he born so beautiful

Why was he born at all

He’s no chuffing use to anyone

He’s no chuffing use at all.

 

One wheel on my wagon

Tell Cornwall we won’t arrive

The place that we

got in this fix

Is Coventry’s

A46

So we never quite made St Ives.

 

One wheel on my wagon

Bloody Hell! Here’s the police

If they’d a mind

to be unkind

I reckon they’ll

send me to jail

I’ll be 80 before my release!

 

One wheel on my wagon

So I’m not rolling along

I know you’ll scoff –

the wheel came off

The holiday

was then passé

Gert’s not singing a happy song

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 26th Jun 2013 13:43

Forgive me if I feel like singing..."Hey Mr Caravan Man - shift that b....y load! And let God's Rail Road and not the Highway Code guide you to the promised land..." (Cornwall, of course!)(with apologies to The Byrds). Hard luck JC. Not the sort of holiday experience anyone wants. I once nearly lost the rear o/s wheel of my old Austin Healey near Reading one Christmas...managing to stop in time, thank goodness, as the wobble reached eye-blinking levels "out of true".
I arrived for Xmas lunch at my sister's place in a
breakdown wagon!!

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 25th Jun 2013 21:54

Get back in the wagon woman, I know what I'm doing!

Higgerdy, hoggerdy, hoggerdy hi! just watch those caravans, go rolling on by!

Bad luck John, there goes the money for the season ticket then?

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Dave Bradley

Tue 25th Jun 2013 20:50

Oh dear. Good poem though.

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Shirley Smothers

Mon 24th Jun 2013 18:42

Did this happen to you?
Nice poem. I sometimes wish I could write funny poems about bad things that happen to me.
Good to know your O.K.

Shirley

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Jun 2013 23:12

Harry,
Entirely autobiographical, I'm afraid. It happened a week ago.
Luckily the only casualties were metal, plastic and money.

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 23rd Jun 2013 23:08


John,
I hope this hasn`t just happened.

(If it has, trust you to go and make a poetical
Joke/song about it!...I remember the carp one)

Glad you both seem to be okay.

(And the rhymings neat)

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