WriteOutLoud Women Blues
(open to all offers...)
I want a WriteOutLoud woman to do anything in the world for me
I want a WriteOutLoud woman to do anything in the world for me
She could lick my piece into shape; I mean my poetry.
I’d take down her pantoums and jiggle her spondees for fun
She’d mouth both my rondels and my phaleucian
We’d make the two-backed couplet until completion.
Now people if you are wondering why this poor boy has vowed
To work his way through all the girls who frequent WriteOutLoud
The answer, my friends, is plain to see
I’m a true cunning linguist; I just love poetry.
I’d love that woman when she’s in expletive mode
Or with her sestina they’d do a Sapphic ode
I’d play with her caesura till my diction explodes.
I want a WriteOutLoud woman to do anything in the world for me
I want a WriteOutLoud woman to do anything in the world for me
She can lick my piece into shape; I mean my poetry.
Isobel
Mon 19th Aug 2013 19:45
Well if you were to ask me to lick this piece into shape, I'd have to say that some of the demonstrative and possessive pronouns in your song were at odds with the written format - perhaps you became more demonstrative and possessive as you got really into your subject matter, John?
For now, I think I'll echo Ann - but I did have a jolly good chuckle - and I LOVE the blues - the guitar work and the flow of your poetry. Did it just trip of your tongue John?
We should do a double act - when I'm being smutty, I think I could out-smut you!
;)) x