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Night Scented Stock

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Night Scented Stock

 

tick

 

unfamiliar room

in a strange bed

full of creaks

eyes heavy lidded

from restless sleep

shadows dance

in corners

at the edge

of your peering.

silence hisses

as the house groans

branches prise

at the window frame

scratching out

their insistent cravings

in regular tattoos

heartbeat racing

breath explodes

in the cold air

momentarily casting

ghosts from lungs

screaming to be freed

from the gripping

of your chest

a slither

a whisper

a sigh

a groan

only some of these

things are yours

in the nightmare room

at the top of the stairs

round the dark alcove

past the grandfather clock

by the dusty mirror

something steps

from the mud dark recess

of a corner

and the child

with the vivid

imagination

feels the warmth

spread and chill

against flannelette

and as the demon

slips away

the heavy steps

of someone

who will not

understand

treads upon

the stairs

with accusing

thuds

drawing close

and switching

the light on

 

tock……

bed wettingchilds fearfearimaginationnightmaresstrange housestrange room

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Isobel

Fri 25th Oct 2013 13:04

Just to add, that I like the way you build up tension in your poem.

Would have added it to last comment but couldn't be bothered re-formatting it all.

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Isobel

Fri 25th Oct 2013 13:03

And yet there's a sadness to it. There are imaginary demons and there are real ones.

the heavy steps
of someone
who will not
understand
treads upon
the stairs
with accusing
thuds
drawing close
and switching
the light on
tock……

For the reader, the scariest thing is what might happen next.

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Dave Bradley

Fri 25th Oct 2013 08:13

Unusual poem and one I can certainly relate to - probably others on the site too. Poets tend to be highly sensitive and have strong imaginations, and that goes right back to childhood. Poetry's role is often to face up to highly personal truths which people sometimes avoid. Despite that, this is the first poem I can recall reading which touches on the subject of bed-wetting. Well done.

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