RENEWAL
“In the midst of life we are in death.”
The angels wonder why
mankind hangs on to pointless breath
refusing just to die.
Three score and ten, is but hors d’oeuvre
we take another bite.
Spare parts fitted with such verve
fend off that final night.
The reaper stamps a tapered toe
his whetstone rasps an oath.
Sickly, and senile, came when due!
Now, he waits for both.
And Mother Nature ponders all:
where did it all go wrong?
The air is heavy with a Fall
The Age is almost done.
She’ll wait out Armageddon’s cull
with seed, deep in the earth.
And in time’s fullness, joyfully
to latent life, give birth.
barrie singleton
Sun 27th Oct 2013 09:27
Well - neither of those poems would have been written had you not set me a challenge. (Now tell me to tidy my home!)
Sadly, I suspect the energy comes from infant rage, redirected - another human paradox.
I am glad you write only when passion dictates. At our Workshop, we use the term 'toothpaste job' for a poem 'squeezed out' to a set theme. It usually shows! Off now, to kill some windmills . . .