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Wild Geese in Tesco

You do not have to be free.
You do not have to point yourself through sky, 
over rivers and mountains for your value to soar.
You only have to let plucked and frozen
flesh, naked and pimply, nestle
on a sterile white shelf. See
how much more is your worth.
Meanwhile the talk is of how long
to leave you and the climate that most
enhances your taste; we discuss and dissect
our favourite parts, your colour and texture,
compare you warmly to your fellow creatures.
Meanwhile you were never more popular;
lonely no longer. We eat what you are.
At the end of aisle four, pockets of clean blue sky
are reasonably priced in an artificial light.
Meanwhile over and over the tannoy announces
your place in the shopping list of things.
It is not big. But it is not Lidl.

 

 

◄ And when we were sat in the Odeon

Eastnor Castle Easter Monday ►

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Isobel

Fri 26th Sep 2014 19:20

A powerful one cos it's up to the reader what they make of it - and depending upon your own particular viewpoint you can read this in different ways.

So much more powerful than a preachy pro vegetarian poem - but with that dry under belly that leads you to think.

I love the title - like Laura, I imagine it's the only poem out there on this theme ;)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 26th Feb 2014 14:00

Wow. This is an amazing poem. As I was reading it, I was thinking of you in the shop, seeing the geese, and starting with the idea of this :D

I can't pick out any lines - top to toe this is fantastic, one of the best things I've read for a while now. Funny, poignant, gotta be original ! I think it must be the ONLY poem in the world about a frozen goose in the Tesco heh.

I will pick out one line. 'We eat what you are.' - so simple, succinct, powerful.

Nice one Ray

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