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"Schemie Burd"

Have you ever met a "Schemie Burd"

From the south side of the city

Where social housing's at it's worst

And life is pretty shitty.

 

Her attitude is hardened

By the things she's seen and done

Like a 'favour' for a taxi fare

Turning tricks for half a ton.

 

People take a second glance

When they pass her in the street

You can see she was a looker, once

Despite the craters and crow's feet.

 

She knows she had potential

To leave that life behind

But, too many "you're not good enoughs"

Soon made her change her mind.

 

She's just another "schemie burd"

You see 'em ten a penny

Double buggy, fag in hand

Looked down upon by many.

 

Maybe, in another life

Her kids would have a father

Her nails and hair immaculate

A wardrobe full of Zara.

 

Her head held high, a sense of pride

She walks through the estate

Just another "schemie burd"

Her life, her choice, her fate.

 

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:38

I would have just one addition to your work- it would change the tenor of the work and reverse the finale- a ? ;) Tommy

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Candice Reineke

Tue 8th Jul 2014 18:53

Helene, I really like this one...it reminds me of that Charles Swindoll (Lou Holtz) quote: "Life is 10 percent what happens to you and 90 percent how you react to it."

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Wed 18th Jun 2014 22:16

Like it - indeed as you say there are so many people who would have had a totally different life if they just had the one person believe in them enough to open doors for them.
Best wishes, Dave

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