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A Mother's Lament

For many years I led the way
until you joined me at my side.
Now you're striding out in front,
and leaving me behind.


Sometimes, I have called you back
and you have answered as before
but my voice is getting weak,
the miles between too far.


For you have your own roads to tread
and your own loved ones walk behind.
Until they start to catch you up,
your time is theirs, not mine.


It seems that I must let you go
but if when days are dark you feel
you need my love, you know I'll come.
'Til then, I walk alone.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 12th Nov 2014 10:00

Awww - a lovely gentle wistful poem, this.

But wow, SIX?!! Oh my lord, I never made it past the one haha :D To be fair, she never slept more than an hour for 18 months. That MIGHT have put me off a tad! I was a single mother for most of her life too.

Anyhoo, yep, I know those feelings. My lass left home early this year, and if I may, I'd like to share my poem about that with you. I thought I was ready for her to leave, but when it came to it, it was a HUGE emotional rollercoaster, for the both of us.

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=40773

You know, they always will turn back to you, when they need you :)

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Judi Strega

Wed 12th Nov 2014 07:28

Thank you, M C and Harry for your comments. As a mother of six who is now largely redundant, maternally speaking, it has taken a bit of getting used to. At least I can use the emotions for a poem!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 11th Nov 2014 12:08

Words we can readily relate to in the context of
family and the passing generations.

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 9th Nov 2014 16:18



Understandingly feeling.

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