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Suitcase

The ventriloquist comes out onto the stage
with a suitcase and slowly opens the lid
revealing a ragbag of characters, just as I do, as I once did.
As a sad little girl, my running-away suitcase
held my pencils, paper and Nicky, my doll.
All that I held precious was there in that case and that didn't change at all.
In the 60s, my fab pull-along suitcase
with Mary Quant daisies all over the lid,
held mini skirts that I'd made myself from some fabric designs I did!
Next a large wooden trunk with old brass fittings 
hand-painted by me in a deep navy blue,
became a refuge for my paints, cats and children sometimes, too.
Then carrier bags were all we needed
as I left my husband for freedom of mind.
According to him, he owned it all and so I left it all behind.
The case I owned next was smaller but roomy
as acquisition came once more to the fore.
My style became most important to me, my substance belittled once more.
Now older and wiser, I own many suitcases, 
trunks and overnight bags, some large and some small.
They hold nothing whatever precious to me as my heart now holds it all.

◄ The 25th Floor

A Mother's Lament ►

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 7th Nov 2014 16:27

Possessions can bring freedom but they can also
keep us prisoner in a variety of ways. Our wish and need for them change with the passage of time, according to our values and our situations. The trick is to know what to keep and what to discard - and when - because the
reasons for having them are the most important aspect of their possession.
Keep up the good work.

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Judi Strega

Fri 7th Nov 2014 12:35

Graham, thank you for your thoughts - it is so helpful to get feedback. It's true that many seem not to understand the concept of fiction but I certainly have learned that possessions aren't very important at all.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 7th Nov 2014 09:57

I don't know whether this is autobiographical or not. Commentors are quick to assume every piece like this is a personal record and not just clever work.

Either way the metaphor of keeping cases and bags (and losing them) is a strong evocation of how we compartmentalize our lives (or experiences) and how at the end of things, they matter very little at all.

Clever piece Judi,

Graham

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