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GOODBYE TO A LITTLE LIFETIME

I took it for a paper scrap

Upon the carpet's dull brown nap,

But bending forward I could see

It meant more than a scrap to me.

Diminished in death it was the mouse

That shared with me this ancient house

And which had often passed my way

An early morning blur of grey.

Then I recalled a recent night

When I had seen a slower flight...

Much slower than the previous run

In my lamplight's artificial sun.

Had that been a last goodbye

Meant to meet this watcher's eye?

Aware of the encroaching dark and cold

As a little lifetime lost its hold.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd May 2015 17:10

Thanks JC - tho' not quite so timorous in its final appearance.

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John Coopey

Thu 21st May 2015 22:28

Wee sleekit cow'rin tim'rous beastie"! You're lucky you got one; they don't have a lot of moral rectitude!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st May 2015 21:08

Thanks - I am lost and raypool. It seemed somehow more
affecting that the little life should expire within view from
the regular "eyeline" from my chair rather than a hundred
and one other places out of sight and mind.

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raypool

Thu 21st May 2015 20:13

Lovely simple and direct style that is quite wistful and after my own heart! Nice title too.

I am lost

Thu 21st May 2015 17:50

I like the way the poem was written. I can vividly imagine what happened there.

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