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I think this is so powerful; I don't drink much at all but I have seen it in action and been close to the attempted suicide of a girl friend partly due to it. Well done.
Thank you all for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. Thank you. M:) x
Lynn Hamilton
Thu 13th Aug 2015 20:49
Enjoyed reading Michelle. Cheers x
This is clever in that not only does it take a touchy subject and make it jovial (in poetic terms anyway) but the repetition and language mirrors the over familiarity alcohol brings.
i dont know if that makes much sense, but i just fell asleep in the bath so i am not at my most verbose...
Michelle snap Tommy
Thanks Dave. This was written a long time ago, but I still kinda like it.
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Various
Fri 20th May 2016 22:48
This is powerful. Its such a huge statement and describes the casual way that some of us self destruct, Thank you.