Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

brooks hatlen

I used to work in a car body shop

In Holloway

We specialised in top of the range cars

Alfas

Audis

Porsche

Now anyone who knows Holloway

Will automatically know

That if you drive a nice car

In Holloway

You are a drug dealer

Or you are lost

The place I worked

Was directly opposite

The women’s prison

And the saddest thing

Was the ladies who were let out

And instead of meeting their families

Loved ones

Partners

They simply sat on the kerb

Outside the prison gates

Not knowing what to do

Waiting for someone to tell them

To eat

To sleep

To pray

To exercise

No one told them

So they just sat

Like statues

Faced with a decision

They had not had to make

For aeons

They did the only thing they could

They stood up

Screaming and kicking and biting

Until someone came out

Rescued them

Took them back

To comfort

To peace

Behind bars

Beyond hope.

◄ push

shutter speed ►

Comments

Profile image

Stu Buck

Fri 4th Sep 2015 15:18

thanks all. sorry for not responding sooner, i have been on holiday. its lovely to come back to an appreciative comment or two.
i look forward to catching up on all your fine work in the next few hours (no internet in the deep south (of wales))

Profile image

Tommy Carroll

Mon 31st Aug 2015 18:25

- Been there to pick someone up & been there to be picked-up. Nothing better than to have oppos greet you. None of my visits indoors entailed a prolonged stay so how the feelings must be for them that are...lost.
Chiselled piece Stu.

Profile image

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 31st Aug 2015 17:55

Sucked in is the reader, to a harsh reality brilliantly developed. That casual 'turn' to the poem's real crux is outstanding.

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Mon 31st Aug 2015 12:35

The word "institutionalised" comes to mind immediately, but
these days there is so much attention given to "rehabilitating the offender" that it would be nice to think
that such incidents are rare outside prisons today. I
thought for a moment that there would be mention of
some being met by their ponces and driven away in style!
The mention of Holloway (Pentonville Road?) reminded me
of a copper from the 1950s who patrolled that patch -
known for its hard men and rough and ready street life.
He himself was a weightlifter who could press 200lbs
from the shoulders overhead and had his tales to tell!

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message