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Black Spire

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Black Spire

Dressed in robes of soot
from Merrie City chimneys.
Jet cathedral walls.

Burnt toast by Bread street,
pointing to God in heaven
under Yorkshire skies.

Protects souls inside
from the searing heat of hell.
Charcoal sinners flesh.

Wakefield’s grubby church
sitting atop Westgate’s throne
like a nesting crow.

The centuries turn,
blackening on a slow spit
that dominates man.

Cleanliness next to
Godliness they always say.
Our prayers are answered.

In my time of youth
they blast the walls with water
under high pressure.

Now a cleansed steeple
sees the millennium out.
New enlightenment.

wakefield cathedralhaikuX8BHPcleansing soot

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 6th Sep 2015 20:19

Ian,
The question is: What are they building these days to match them?

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raypool

Sat 5th Sep 2015 23:46

I've not had the pleasure of reading you before Ian, but here I am enthralled with the picture . Great line is "blackening on a slow spit./2 The whole piece reminds me of an early postcard and carries so much nostalgia and humour. cheers Ray

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