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On The Slag Heap

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On The Slag Heap

 

Quenching the eternal flame,

the furnaces won’t burn again,

the northern dragons will lay still -

the Government has had its fill.

 

At its heart a molten core

that will implode and beat no more.

The mill will close, the light will die

and in the dark the ghosts will cry.

 

The workers will go home to bed

not knowing if their family’s fed

or if they will become a number

disappearing whilst they slumber.

 

Another industry breathes its last,

what once was present becomes past,

the mines, the docks and now the steel

like butterflies upon a wheel.

 

When the grass has covered all,

like graves with bodies in the soil,

some day we will look back and say

these tired beasts had had their day.

 

But that will be only half a tale -

economics made them fail,

priced them to a lingering death -

squeezed them of their failing breath

 

Yet in the end nobody cared

how these aging titans fared

they didn’t hear their sad swan song -

but they will miss them when they’re gone.

 

‘Another dog has had its day’,

the fawning politicians say -

and like a dog they put it down

destroying one more northern town.

 

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raypool

Tue 29th Sep 2015 20:38

Ian, lovely poem. Without going into the whys or wherefores of the political slurry it tells a compelling tale and stands upright as a defence of honest labour. The whole ethos of lives dedicated to the cause of Great Britain has been airbrushed by multinational corporations from skyscrapers.
May I suggest an alternative : "what once was present becomes THE past," to make the line scan?
humbly yours. Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 29th Sep 2015 12:21

Change - that great reminder that time passes and the
world spins on. Am I right when I recall this plant being
foreign-owned...Thai perhaps? In a global world, the
competition is growing and emerging nations with their
cheap eager labour forces will be the beneficiaries. But
"Team GB" has long been skilled at adapting - and GS's
reminder of how Corby has met change is one such
example. In the meantime, it is always the case that the
individual and those dependent on him/her will suffer,
certainly in the shorter term and they should be helped
to move on - with the money our government seems to
find readily enough to send abroad as "aid". Isn't it time
government set up a "Home Aid" programme to cover
such occurrences and their hardships for the local folk?

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 29th Sep 2015 11:43

This is really emotional stuff Ian and once again makes one think how politics, economics, fashion, technology, et al, all go towards the irreversible change that takes place everywhere.

I've never lived north of Leicester myself so do not understand the importance that these once great industries had for towns up there.

The nearest I got was living and working in Corby (little Scotland as it was known then) where steel ruled the roost.

Today it still thrives as a technology and communications hub.

Change is incessant, some good some bad!

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