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incarnartion

Those days of bruised skies

And sweet frailties

When I proclaimed to the world

I would never become you

Seem so long ago

And now my wife

Lies alone

Crying

And I look down

And see your hands.

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Stu Buck

Wed 30th Sep 2015 17:49

hello. for some reason WOL isnt telling me when people comment on my poems. annoying. anyway, thanks for the comments. sins of thy father indeed. all seems so cyclical and unescapable.

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raypool

Sun 27th Sep 2015 21:35

A powerful vignette , Stu to ponder over ; it grabbed me - a sense of dislocation from the past is sometimes valuable. As you get to my age, it all seems so academic in some way.
Thanks so much for you glowing comments on my London extravaganza. I'm on safe ground with a bit of history I think!

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