Orchard
Like rotting fruit
I found her
Hanging from the tree
The note she left us
Simply read
‘This life is not for me’
Comments
very effective , and has an almost detached feel , quite disconcerting - perhaps like children's stories that are sometimes full of menace.
crikey Stu, straight to the point this one. I think that is why I like it. it also appeals to my melancholic side.
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Stu Buck
Wed 30th Sep 2015 17:51
strange fruit indeed. always holidays version for me, never simone (although she has her merits). i was going for an off colour nursery rhyme so clearly i succeeded in some way. also, it rhymes. its only two lines but still. thats good for me! thanks david, im glad you took so much from it!