THE LONELY DRINKER
One man's in, another drinking
sharing a recent story
thousandth hand across the land
such is the speed of news we share
another molecule of bonding
the drinking opening up the scene
into the time they have to spare
give us this day our daily bread
before the rising yeast goes slack
another way to move the human spirit on.
Just out of sight a man is alone
with his pint alight in the slumming sun
and no-one sees his downcast stare
witht the weight of this thoughts, his matted hair
As you mine your comedy gold
his story will remain untold
while fate casts down its ancient runes
and depression plays its endless tunes
the road diverging the molecules merging
another way to move the spirit on.
You stay within your comfort zone
the same old beer, the same old cheer
your bonds remain, you stay united
and always exclude the uninvited
somehow the spirit must always move along.
Stu Buck
Sat 3rd Oct 2015 11:41
an odd one this. i certainly see the likeness to my piece, the self imposed barriers we put up to keep us safe are indeed sad and fascinating at the same time. its a good topic for a poem and one that I imagine plenty of poets have plenty to say about. Its a good character study and an interesting piece.