l stood and stared

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I stood and stared-

a long time seeking a

welcome gaze

that returned my greeting.

The World stared back

then went its way,

perhaps to lunch, perhaps

to play.

My friend the Mirror-

a listener of sorts,

in silence watched

and kept its thoughts.

 

Words and foto T Carroll

 

◄ Winter's cleave

Deeply breathing ►

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Fri 23rd Oct 2015 10:51

Cheers Ray, re 'I stood and stared'. It was during one of my moments of contemplation, and, catching my reflection as I stared out of the window. I do have the original mirror on the original wall and the original foto too. ;-) Tommy

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raypool

Thu 22nd Oct 2015 22:07

This interesting poem reminds me of a strong silent type that may seem self contained, and the mirror keeps your secret. Would I be right, or is it not auto biographical Tommy? yours with respect.

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Thu 22nd Oct 2015 18:22

It is me CBT

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 22nd Oct 2015 15:47

A very good one, Tommy. That is you in the photo, yes? Or a close relative? Penetrating eyes - aquiline nose - saucy moustache - got to be family.

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